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Captain John Evend

Post by vangran on Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:13 am

Name: John Evend

Age: 27

Height: 6 foot 1

Affiliation: CHROME

Rank: Captain

Country(or colony): Colony 91 Lagrange point 3, White skin color

Physical features(optional): Has platinum-white hair, with dark blue eyes.

Personality: Will fight for what he believes in. He gives his all for the cause of freedom, and would see that others give no less. He loves a good drink, but he won't go overboard. He will do anything to give the colonies freedom.

Background: Born in N.E. 0284 to Albert and Joan Evend, he was raised to believe in the cause of independence. He was 15 when the war ended, but, being raised to distrust the AEO he did not believe that the war was over just yet. 3 years after the war ended he joined the military. He quickly went up in rank. When Ochii's daughter was murdered by her husband he immediately resigned from the AEO military and joined CHROME's space forces. When he left the AEO he took his ship and his crew with him, as they are all loyal to CHROME. And, supplied with a small force of mobile suits, he was ready to fight for the colonies independence.


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Re: Captain John Evend

Post by MSL on Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:15 am


Vangran,
This is very well done. The character's background is explained well, his physical features and his personality is sharply defined, but there's just one teeny-weeny, itsy-bitsy problem. Well, its not so small since it'll cause some problems later when you have a flashback.

Mobile Suit Legends NX starts in the year of N.E. 0311, but you said your character was born in 0272. Wouldn't that make him 39 years old instead of 27, as you have stated here in your profile? By all means he should’ve been a kid when the Comet Wars was about to end.

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Post by MSL on Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:36 am

Ok all Set!

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